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Sunny Grows's avatar

I 🫢 luv this storytelling format.

Conversational + you get invested in getting to know the characters.

Sunny Grows's avatar

I'm just getting started with my story based pub, but I think my chapters are way too long as weekly posts (13 to 19 minute reads, and much longer if read aloud πŸ˜•)

Is that too long πŸ€”?

I think it's a bit too long, and you're probably gonna say it's a 🀏 bit too long, and I'll agree, but be honest πŸ™ , cuz yours was an easy read, and mine has to have chapter sections like 1.1, 1.2, 1.3, etc.

I'm writing (fun) Educational Content ... within a Story Framework 🀞🀌

But ... Is it too long πŸ“

(especially if sent out by email ... 19 minute reads?)

πŸ™‡β€β™€οΈ

The Educating Parent's avatar

It’s hard to know what is going to work. I’m writing longer stories as well, but the ones I’m publishing on Substack are meant to be short and sweet - something that can be read aloud over breakfast, followed by a quick chat if the kids are interested. That’s more in line with my style of homeschooling.

Your stories sound interesting!

Sunny Grows's avatar

The heart of my stories is about:

The Magic Found Inside Seeds

&

How Seeds Turn Into Food

🫘+πŸ’§=🌱

Exquisitely Strong Mama's avatar

I really enjoyed this. As a parent, it reminded me how important it is to recognize that kids don’t all participate in the same way. Sometimes watching, observing, or taking on a different role is exactly what helps them feel included.

According to Mimi's avatar

What a fun story and so realistic!

April ❦ The Narrative Nest's avatar

Oh, this is just perfection. Writing stories about ordinary homeschool kids. We're going to have to read this as a family. 😁

The Educating Parent's avatar

I’d love to know what your children think about the stories April. I have so many ideas tumbling out of my head, I think I’ve finally landed on what I want to do for the rest of my life. ✍️😊

Sunny Grows's avatar

Haha, that's exactly what I told me mums (my Mother) yesterday.

I found my lifelong calling! πŸ€— Finally a direction and drive in my life!

April ❦ The Narrative Nest's avatar

I’ll make a plan to read it to my daughter ASAP after we get through this crazy week and weekend. And I’ll report back. I’ll let her know you’d love feedback and that will encourage her to provide some specifics. 🀣 She gets into it if she thinks she’s got a job to do.

The Educating Parent's avatar

Thank you! :-)

Crazy weeks and weekends are packed with learning - which simply doubles the fun and exhaustion!

April ❦ The Narrative Nest's avatar

It’s so true. We took our daughter to her first concert of her favorite musician this past weekend. It was a small venue, all ages, but she was the only kid there. Afterward, she got to sing karaoke, which she has wanted to do for a while but was too nervous. She did it and got tons of support. Learning comes in all kinds of packages. πŸ˜ƒ